Redline Help?

EDIT: more than one person can redline if they wish xD


so after like months of failed attempts to start a ref for Rynn i think i like the direction im going in.

But i dont know.. theres just alot bugging me about this and i would love you forever if someone did a redline of this ;__;

Keep in mind:

-she doesnt have typical dragon anatomy.. her back legs are meant to be alot longer in comparison to her arms
-her metatarsals are also meant to be very large ( sort of think of a kangaroo sitting on its heels )
-i sort of want to keep her tail huge and obnoxious to be honest. I know it's totally impossible and huge.. but i thats what i love about it. c:


and ignore her face.. its derpy and i dont like it but whatever xD

im not trying to discriminate here, but i would appreciate it if someone with actual anatomy knowledge redlines this. You should probably know who you are anyway xD I dont care who gives critiques and comments however.. i appreciate every bit of constructive criticism <3

Everything ^ (c) to me.